In front of thousands or more
I surrendered
I held her hand,
brought her home
She was called my wife.
She too submitted
to me and my family
marriage was consummated
I made love
She lost her virginity.
We were now man and wife
I followed all rituals
like all couples do.
Now she even bears my child
but lord oh lord there is another
who bears my soul.
Shubhra, 17th June 07
I surrendered
I held her hand,
brought her home
She was called my wife.
She too submitted
to me and my family
marriage was consummated
I made love
She lost her virginity.
We were now man and wife
I followed all rituals
like all couples do.
Now she even bears my child
but lord oh lord there is another
who bears my soul.
Shubhra, 17th June 07
Comments
I liked all of them - this one the best.
Keep writing!
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